Hi, I really like the portrait you took. It's a bit dark with the shaddows on the face, but there is a nice balance between light and dark overall. I think the background is a bit busier and distracting then it needs to be. It would have been nice to take this picture against a wall or something so the focus is the person.
I assume your second picture is environemtal. I like the tilt of the camera it gives you a more interesting POV. For an environmental picture I don't really see much environment. It could have been cooler to have the drone (I think it's a drone) in the air and your subject controlling it and showing where they choose to fly. I like this picture and especially the excitement in the face of your subject is nice, but I feel like you could share more with this picture.
For your last picture I assume this is your symbolic image, because the face is cut out. I think it is a cool idea to focus on the drone, but I do not know what you are trying to share about this person based on this picture. Especially with the drone not as in focus as it could be it makes me wonder what the focus of the picture is. I feel like this is so close to being cool. If you had your subject with a screw driver or something then you could show how they are handy and how they not only fly drones, but fix them too. Even if you decided to keep this pose, it could be improved if you were closer and positioned the person so that the drone itself isn't reflecting the sunlight so much. (I just worry that spot could get over expossed very easily)
I think overall all of your pictures have good bones, but you could take some more care in the framing and positioning of your subject.
Hi, I really like the portrait you took. It's a bit dark with the shaddows on the face, but there is a nice balance between light and dark overall. I think the background is a bit busier and distracting then it needs to be. It would have been nice to take this picture against a wall or something so the focus is the person.
ReplyDeleteI assume your second picture is environemtal. I like the tilt of the camera it gives you a more interesting POV. For an environmental picture I don't really see much environment. It could have been cooler to have the drone (I think it's a drone) in the air and your subject controlling it and showing where they choose to fly. I like this picture and especially the excitement in the face of your subject is nice, but I feel like you could share more with this picture.
For your last picture I assume this is your symbolic image, because the face is cut out. I think it is a cool idea to focus on the drone, but I do not know what you are trying to share about this person based on this picture. Especially with the drone not as in focus as it could be it makes me wonder what the focus of the picture is. I feel like this is so close to being cool. If you had your subject with a screw driver or something then you could show how they are handy and how they not only fly drones, but fix them too. Even if you decided to keep this pose, it could be improved if you were closer and positioned the person so that the drone itself isn't reflecting the sunlight so much. (I just worry that spot could get over expossed very easily)
I think overall all of your pictures have good bones, but you could take some more care in the framing and positioning of your subject.